Thread:Spockmum/@comment-44706065-20200201104731/@comment-37443679-20200201142346

You've done a great job Noah, but I know how it helps to have someone else read through to be sure the meaning is clear and the grammar is correct. So I took the liberty of proof-reading the whole thing. I have made a couple of suggestions (just suggestions, it's your baby!)

'''1A. Look after yourself.''' OK

'''1B. Visit your friends ….Further charging/Boosting tips:''' ‘Charging premium locations (…) if you are a Joker/strategist, Accountant or Keeper can be particularly useful during the monthly special event. Many players play these locations as the drop rate for the event access passes can be higher.’

C. Send Gifts  ‘Bear in mind’ not ‘bare in mind’ (ha ha the proof-reader in me awakens)

'''D. State your needs. ok'''

'''2. Compatibility and deleting.... '''Great!

3. Ways to help friends on the Forum A. B. C. D. - good

'''E. For some, it's not just a game …. '''Ok until last para. How about something like this:

‘None of these are 'wrong', but just reflect the fact that we have different lifestyles and motivation in the game. It’s worth bearing this in mind if you're ever left wondering why someone is getting intensely stressed over something that seems trivial to you or doesn't seem to take it as seriously as you do. We should all respect each other’s game styles and remember that we are very different individuals in the real world.’

There are so many tips and explanations in the forum. It really needs someone to go through them and delete the ones that are no longer correct, like that much-quoted guide to TTing which is disastrously out of date and leads to screwing up the timers.

Hugs

Spock PhD

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